certain types of looks (fire)

Greedily exhausting
all oxygen, the room
no longer breathing, I

feel those flames
leap from organ to organ,
saving the heart for last.

3 Comments

  1. Alexa says:

    I really like the last stanza – its crisp but profound too. nice one. x

  2. Alexa says:

    Omg i've just seen that im on your blog list. thats badass. But my title has changed since then 😛

  3. Jody Costa says:

    thanks Alexa – i will update the title! cheers friend!

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