startled by air

By the bay,
on cement cracked by weeds,
people sit like gulls fishing in dying daylight.
Fish bite, get taken, tossed, have one last
gulp and die.

Watch fish startled by air. Watch weeds bend beneath thin legs.
Watch gull-like people throw another line,
drown another beer,
unfazed.

12 Comments

  1. Unknown's avatar Brian Miller says:

    when you look at it that way its pretty brutal…the taking of life without reverence or thougth…

  2. Unknown's avatar Brian Miller says:

    when you look at it that way its pretty brutal…the taking of life without reverence or thougth…

  3. Unknown's avatar Laurie Kolp says:

    Thought-provoking piece.

  4. Unknown's avatar Laurie Kolp says:

    Thought-provoking piece.

  5. An uncentimental approach to a dying scape– evocative piece. ~peace, Jason

  6. An uncentimental approach to a dying scape– evocative piece. ~peace, Jason

  7. Unknown's avatar Jody Costa says:

    thank you all for reading~ 🙂

  8. Unknown's avatar Jody Costa says:

    thank you all for reading~ 🙂

  9. Unknown's avatar Beth Winter says:

    An interesting perspective on fishing. I have always found it to be a centering activity although I rarely use bait and rarely keep what I catch. I would hope that once the fish were served up, the fisherman would say a prayer of thanks for the sacrifice. Crisp, succinct and thought provoking.

  10. Unknown's avatar Beth Winter says:

    An interesting perspective on fishing. I have always found it to be a centering activity although I rarely use bait and rarely keep what I catch. I would hope that once the fish were served up, the fisherman would say a prayer of thanks for the sacrifice. Crisp, succinct and thought provoking.

  11. Unknown's avatar Jody Costa says:

    Thanks Beth! When I wrote this, I was just struck by the scene of the fish so casually tossed to die on the sidewalk by all these fishermen. I eat all kinds of seafood so my reaction took me by surprise!

  12. Unknown's avatar Jody Costa says:

    Thanks Beth! When I wrote this, I was just struck by the scene of the fish so casually tossed to die on the sidewalk by all these fishermen. I eat all kinds of seafood so my reaction took me by surprise!

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