she says
“i’m sorry
i disappeared, it’s just
i felt that i had been cast-
off, i always feel
that way”
he can’t look her
in the eye
having already
cast his line
downstream.
cast-off
Sending poetry to the world
Sending poetry to the world
she says
“i’m sorry
i disappeared, it’s just
i felt that i had been cast-
off, i always feel
that way”
he can’t look her
in the eye
having already
cast his line
downstream.
Press Send Poetry 
brilliant.
i thought this poem was stupendous. In my opinion though, i would have changed the title simply because when you read “cast off” in the stanza, it loses some of its punch having read it in the title previously. but wow.
thank you, thank you, thank you! good suggestion on the title, Alexa, and thanks for the follow!
great poem. amazing connections. rajni
thank you very much rajni!