Capt. F. A. Rhodes Jr. 1/3/71, POW

Etched name in silver reflects a man
engraved in a fight not his own,
a name i can run
my fingers on like Braille,
it is all i know —
of his uniform stained or how
the sweat of the jungle
may have flowed
between the stubble on his lip.
What could it have been
but a deafening thunder that rose
into clouds disappearing
as certain as smoke.

8 thoughts on “Capt. F. A. Rhodes Jr. 1/3/71, POW

  1. oh I like this! I like it a lot – it's like a snapshot and I particularly enjoyed how you worded it – “a name i can run
    my fingers on like Braille,” – the mix of tangible and not – and loved the last few lines too – nice job! OT

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