outside
winds rattle in their Song
glory to themselves
basking in their chill, their roar,
their natural state
of movement —
We- the page- the vessel
the form that gives
the winds their form
as they move
rattle, dance,
their self-assured
Songs of them-selves.
oh wind,
you fearsome friend,
always with the
troubling advice:
“move, keep moving”
written 4.12.11
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if you keep moving they can catch you….it says to the pages…as i chase them across the parking lot…smiles.
if you keep moving they can catch you….it says to the pages…as i chase them across the parking lot…smiles.
Very wild and Walt–I love the sense of freedom and openness, with just that sobering awareness at the end that life is not a game, but something larger than ourselves which we must always grapple with. Thanks for sharing with dVerse, Jody.
Very wild and Walt–I love the sense of freedom and openness, with just that sobering awareness at the end that life is not a game, but something larger than ourselves which we must always grapple with. Thanks for sharing with dVerse, Jody.
And the pens keep moving.
I read this to thunder.
And the pens keep moving.
I read this to thunder.
Oh, I like this a lot! That's just the kind of advice the wind would give, and I like the ambiguity of the wind as a “fearsome friend.”
Oh, I like this a lot! That's just the kind of advice the wind would give, and I like the ambiguity of the wind as a “fearsome friend.”
This has seeds of a thematic observer-observed dichotomy here, with the wind forming a third-party in the equation.
This has seeds of a thematic observer-observed dichotomy here, with the wind forming a third-party in the equation.
very strong imagery – great style too
very strong imagery – great style too
Enjoyed!
Read again – liked the feel of wind in the words
Enjoyed!
Read again – liked the feel of wind in the words
thank you kindly friends, thank you kindly!
thank you kindly friends, thank you kindly!
Poetry by JC Snyder 
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